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Apr 22, 2008 11:44:51 GMT 12
Post by Honey_Bunny on Apr 22, 2008 11:44:51 GMT 12
Not the best one I wrote, I must admit...
Time Travelling
I like to go down to the stream Sit on the grass Think and dream
Imagine the world 20 years from now How it would change All I can say is.. wow!
Or imagine going back to 10BC Did people even liven then I guess there's so much more to see
Imagine going to the 70's Flower power and long hair Sharing a joint with the hippies
The 60's would be cool Just imagine the excitement Of going to Liverpool!
A trip to the 80's nights Lycra pants and discos Headbanging in the neon lights
I want to see the world What it was, how it will be But where is the right road?
Oh Albert, take me too! We can explore together Take me with you
Alas I must be getting home Tomorrow I 'll come back And keep dreaming on
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Apr 22, 2008 11:56:02 GMT 12
Post by Piney Heart on Apr 22, 2008 11:56:02 GMT 12
What in the world do you mean? It's great!! ;D
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Apr 22, 2008 11:59:38 GMT 12
Post by Honey_Bunny on Apr 22, 2008 11:59:38 GMT 12
Eehheee... Thank you! I still think I wrote better ones...
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Apr 25, 2008 12:56:23 GMT 12
Post by Octie on Apr 25, 2008 12:56:23 GMT 12
Aw, it's good It's got an unusual meter too, which is quite cool
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Apr 27, 2008 9:08:18 GMT 12
Post by Honey_Bunny on Apr 27, 2008 9:08:18 GMT 12
yes, thats what i didnt like about it...
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