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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 6, 2009 14:52:59 GMT 12
I finished my story! Can't say that it's my best one but it has its nice bits.
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Post by Starbeast on May 8, 2009 12:36:04 GMT 12
Cool, I'll take a look, when I can.
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Post by Octie on May 8, 2009 18:46:53 GMT 12
Honey!!! ^_^ The new instalment of your story is really lovely!! I laughed so hard at the descriptions of Agents Dana and Fox.... "she was the mother figure and he was the naughty little kid who got in trouble" Hilarious! And that conversation about leaving the phone in the car... so funny From the way you write I can actually imagine Fox talking Mulder-style, haha ;D It was really sad to see Kite sad... glad he's feeling better now. And I love your creativity and imagination, and your ability to put them into words and weave them into a story so well I'm proud to have such a talented little sister Keep it up ;D
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Post by Starbeast on May 10, 2009 7:54:56 GMT 12
I agree Lady Octie,
Lady Honey Bunny writes exceptionally well, I thought the "Albert" tale was like an episode of the X-FILES, with special guest stars Albert and Kite.
One of my favorite parts, is when Fox was explaining his insight at the unusual crime scene, well done curious rabbit.
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 12, 2009 19:32:17 GMT 12
From the way you write I can actually imagine Fox talking Mulder-style, haha ;D Hehe ya, it is fun to write it too because I hear him talking when I type. No, I do not hear voices And I love your creativity and imagination, and your ability to put them into words and weave them into a story so well Eeeeeee! I love my creativity and imagination as well! When it they come its important to capture them before they run off I'm proud to have such a talented little sister Aw, you will stare me to the ground.... Lady Honey Bunny writes exceptionally well, I thought the "Albert" tale was like an episode of the XFILES, with special guest stars Albert and Kite. Thank you, Beastie. The funny thing is that I never watched a full episode! One of my favorite parts, is when Fox was explaining his insight at the unusual crime scene, well done curious rabbit. Oh I agree, that was a good part. I acted it out to see what it will be like hehe
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Post by Starbeast on May 15, 2009 5:58:15 GMT 12
Nice to know you sisters get along with each other, my brother and I are close too.
And Honey Bunny,
I get quite envolved with my stories as well, to the point of acting it out, too. It dones help to get a good grasp of a situation, and a better perspective, then just trying to imagine everything.
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Post by Starbeast on May 15, 2009 17:29:47 GMT 12
The SNOW MARK, I'll read it after I complete the Kite story.
I can't imagine what your next reaction will be when you began the 4th chapter.
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 15, 2009 18:09:12 GMT 12
I am intrigued now! As long as Kite and Albert are alive, that's fine. And yes, Octie and I close, she is more like a best friend than a sister.
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Post by Starbeast on May 17, 2009 14:43:45 GMT 12
Stay tuned, my curious rabbit. The 4th chapter is near completion, and the next chapter follows.
What will happen next?
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 17, 2009 20:17:58 GMT 12
^ .... Albert and Kite will end up appearing on the roof top concert? The Grey Alien will be exposed as a spy working for Jack. OR Jack is the grey Alien (he cut his soul into bits, like Voldemort from Harry Potter)!!! Or maybe, Kite will do something by mistake that will get the box going and will boast about all the way back home which will annoy Albert. Or maybe they will follow the Beatles songs and in the songs will give them clues as to how get back home (and Albert will claim partnership in the Lennon-McCartney songs) Or Jack will come back and will try to kill them again but then Eric will transform into Khafra and will kill Jack once and for all
On a different note... What's the bunny salad?
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Post by Starbeast on May 18, 2009 4:40:10 GMT 12
THE LITTLE WHITE RABBIT WAS EXCITED ABOUT STARBEAST'S ALBERT AND KITE TALE. AS IT WAS BEING WRITTEN, BUNNY THE RABBIT HAD SOME IDEAS OF HER OWN, AND RELAYED THEM TO A SILENT TEA SIPPING SPACE WOLF CAPTAIN. STARBEAST DELIGHTED IN BUNNY'S GUESSES AS TO HOW THE STORY WILL CONTINUE.
HONEY BUNNY: "Albert and Kite will end up appearing on the roof top concert? The Grey Alien will be exposed as a spy working for Jack. OR Jack is the grey Alien (he cut his soul into bits, like Voldemort from Harry Potter)!!! Or maybe, Kite will do something by mistake that will get the box going and will boast about all the way back home which will annoy Albert. Or maybe they will follow the Beatles songs and in the songs will give them clues as to how get back home (and Albert will claim partnership in the Lennon-McCartney songs) Or Jack will come back and will try to kill them again but then Eric will transform into Khafra and will kill Jack once and for all." STARBEAST: "I like your ideas, sounds like you could write a story out of what you said."
On a different note...the curious rabbit asked an off-subject question. Her ears turned toward the wolf listening for a response. The Captain smiled and said:
STARBEAST: "What's the bunny salad? It's the one I ate here, the day I accidently destroyed your first tv."
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 18, 2009 14:18:04 GMT 12
The little rabbit just had to laugh in response to her benevolent friend's responses to her ideas.
He looked at her and smiled sweetly yet he couldnt see what is so funny, clearly the bunny had too much of that salad
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Post by Starbeast on May 21, 2009 14:49:27 GMT 12
Starbeast: "I guess the Beatles, effect everyone in different ways."
Bunny: "Oh my goodness, my sister screamed so loud, when she heard them for the first time."
Starbeast: "What did you do?'
Bunny: "I cried tears of joy and fainted. I was ok, but I did miss 14 minute of the radio show."
Starbeast: "I pretended to be a Beatle, shook my head, played air-guitar and sang along."
Bunny: "Really?"
Starbeast: "No, I creid tears of joy and fainted for 27 minutes."
Bunny: "Ha ha ha ha, you're funny."
Starbeast: (crunch crunch) "And you make a great salad. Could you pass me the mountain carrots please."
Bunny: (crunching veggies too) "Here ya go, take the big one."
Starbeast: "Would you like a Klingon tomatoe? Just make sure you smash it before you eat, or it will run away."
Bunny: "Uh-oh, mine just ran away."
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Post by Octie on May 22, 2009 20:10:02 GMT 12
The little rabbit just had to laugh in response to her benevolent friend's responses to her ideas. He looked at her and smiled sweetly yet he couldnt see what is so funny, clearly the bunny had too much of that salad .... hmm, I'm just thinking... a bunny salad... is it like the Bunny Cakes from Midsomer Murders? Honey, your Snowmark story is going really well So clever how you use song titles/lyrics in the story The soul concept is quite clever too. Just finished reading The Blue - that scene with the sea taking David and Fox in its fist was really creative/imaginative. Hope they get out of it though. I got a bit worried when they turned blue (but for some reason the first thing I thought of was The Smurfs ) Oh yeah, thanks for sticking Octopus's Garden in there ;D
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 22, 2009 22:53:48 GMT 12
Smurfs! They were not smurfs! Yea, Bunny cakes... I was going to explain to Beastie at some point in time what they were. But seems the same, taking into account the effect they have on creatures ! The next chapter should include On an Island and Stairway to Heaven ... And sometime in the future there will be a chapter called Don't Leave Me Now
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