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Post by Octie on Apr 29, 2008 17:39:47 GMT 12
“My god , mother that is unbelievable , so what about my farther , Albert and the six degrees of separation , and everything , I need to know everything !” said Gali “Its time we went to sleep know Gali I will tell you the rest tomorrow . Said Guinn . To Be Cont . .... and Guinn expects Gali to go to sleep, nice 'n easy, just like that, after all this? No chance! Just kidding. Wow, that got me all curious Let's see if I got it properly so far: 1) Guinn is a star traveller (which is the same as astral traveller?) and she has told the Pharaohs about the secret of reincarnation, thereby giving them this gift 2) The afterlife is the home of star travellers, but some of them choose to come back rather than go there. 3) Guinn can't go to the afterlife just yet because she is being punished for telling the Pharaohs the secret of reincarnation. 4) Albert is a star traveller too and he doesn't go to the afterlife because he chooses not to (there are still things he wants to find out about this world, etc) Is that right? Oh, and you made me look a word up in the dictionary! Yay, I learnt a new word! ;D Can't wait till the next chapter!! *anticipation* PS: is that what we're meant to do by the way? Comment on the stories in the Chapters board rather than in the story thread? Honey/Kitie?
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Post by Honey_Bunny on Apr 30, 2008 9:33:49 GMT 12
Bloody Hell!Excellent! I need to read it again and digest it properly!!!!! Excellent stuff man!
Octie, yes, i suppose it is
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Post by mrkite23 on May 1, 2008 4:48:13 GMT 12
Octie ! ;D 1. Guinn is half Star traveler [Alien] half Human 2. No the Egyptians think when they die , they go to the Star Travelers home planet Octania , but as in religions through out the world , its rubbish , you just die and thats it . Reincarnation is a secret to only a few and its not dieing as such , because you keep coming back , as i make it up as i go along answer that one PHEW ! 3. same as answer 1. and 2 . i think 4. No Albert is not a star t [alien] and you will have to wait and see , why he continues to return , now thats another story How did i do ? You liked it, i hope , its been a strange one to write , and i think its different approach from the usual ones , and i hope its got a original twist to it .
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 1, 2008 9:51:40 GMT 12
Brilliant story! The secret of the Asteral Travelers - a most awaited truth [what am i on about? ] So, Asteral Traveller and Star Traveller is not the same? Albert is an Asteral Traveller, isnt he? Man, it reminds me of the days when I studied Ancient Egypt at school [hell, i even drew a picture of Isis and Osiris! ] . I had a friend who decided she believes in Isis and she used to wear a pendant of the goddess.. I think she still beleives that. I hope Guin's "tomorrow" comes swiftly!
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Post by Octie on May 2, 2008 10:21:55 GMT 12
Ohh, rightie, Kitie just told me that astral traveller and star traveller is not the same thing It all makes sense now
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 2, 2008 15:49:12 GMT 12
^ Indeed, yet I still need to dig into it more. Get me 'ead 'round it, tha nose....
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 8, 2008 10:43:58 GMT 12
shamefully I have to admit that I only yesterday realized the KB reference....
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Post by Octie on May 21, 2008 11:34:31 GMT 12
The two travellers woke up early the next morning as the sun shone through the dusty and colour faded curtains of the small hotel in Liverpool . Liverpool!! They headed down towards the docks of the river Mersey as for Gali it was her first time in Liverpool and she could feel the history of the place and the thing that was on her mind was the band that was associated with the city The Beatles . “Mother , you have been hear before , havn`t you ?” “A few times over the years “ she replied “Can we go to the place were the Beatles played , is it the Cavern?” Gali asked “Yes we can go that way , but the actual place where they played is not there anymore , but the street is , we can go that way .” replied Guinn . They got to the town centre and then they turned into a small narrow street and the Gali saw a shop that had in large letters The Beatles Shop she knew that this was the place and she walked up the street and she could feel a strange energy coming from the walls of the bars and buildings , this was a indeed a magical place where there seemed to be a lot of positive energy coming the small Victorian street . .. I like that bit I also really like how you described the River Mersey: the sun shone through the grey clouds onto the dark deep River Mersey. still staring across the River that was like a milk pond ... lovely descriptions Guinn looked up at the clock on the Liver building Oh! I've always wondered what it was called!! “Stonehenge !” said Gali and then looked at her mother once again with mouth wide open Yeah, me too, like this: I've always found Stonehenge interesting... “Yes we built it so on the summer solstice when the sun is at a point in the sky , about 23.44 degrees to be precise its rays will shine on a stone and light the way to our map of the stars and to the star in the night sky where the star travellers come from a place in the northern constellation known as Octania , the home planet of my first farther . So, the sun ray will reflect off the stone and signal to the Star Travellers that they can lan at this place? Is that how it works? “Lord of the rings mother , then what ?” Nice exclamation there ;D “Where then!” “Salisbury “ the crowd replied “Ah I get it , its Glastonbury and your all hippies “ said Albert with a look of a winner . 'fraid you'll have to explain the Salisbury/Glastonbury joke... Haha, I've been misreading and mispronouncing Salisbury for ages, until Honey started learning about the history of England at school “Well it was like this “ said the Traveller “Me and Kite was having an argument about how Stonehenge and why it was built and I told him it was built for The Aliens so they had a place to land and take the great leaders to there home world , I suppose it was a sacrifice , in a nice way , but he said it is a Pagan Alter where they sacrificed virgins and the odd chicken and dance around a bit and a good night was had by all on Summer Solstice , except for the virgin of course and maybe the chicken. So we decided to go in our time machine , that’s a machine that travels in time and see if we could find out who was right , well thing is , we had a bit of an accident and we , well landed on a space ship , but we didn’t know until we opened the time machine door and we saw lots of flashing lights and a very large Alien sat reading a book , and he jumped up and he fired this , well a ray gun and he hit me and as I was going down , I saw that red headed jump in the time machine and he buggered off. The next thing I know I wake up surrounded by a load of hippies “ Just look what a friendly argument and a time machine can lead to! ;D Aww, poor Albert... I suppose that alien just got a fright or something... The lady said that they say that love won't last forever But as far as friendship goes, I think I know better Sure, the sun gets bored of warming us The flowers staying in the vase The wind blowing here and there The man in the picture keeping his stare But what I have described is just a fulfilment of things When it comes to friendship be careful of what you think Friendship, like love, comes from the heart Even to those people who are a distance apart Through interest, sharing, love and caring Our bond of friendship grow I'll be forever greatfull for your friendship And I'll be your friend forever more. ... Honey-poem.... “That is very beautiful “ said Gali and wiped a tear from her eye . Aww... I agree “It is indeed , and we lived together for many years until one day there was a storm and there was great black cloud covered the whole village and then a strange ship landed at Stonehenge and we went up to see what it was and it was Kite in the time machine , he had finally found Aran and he told us that he had to take Aran back to the future as if he didn’t it would cause a butterfly effect on the future of our lives and in the future , the future of you my dear Gali as there is more to happen in your life with your farther and me , it broke my heart that he had to go , ... Kitie, you heart-breaker, you!! Just kidding ;D Haha, "back to the future"... but I knew that one day we would meet again and we knew we would have a beautiful daughter , who would be very important outcome to the human race . “ Guinn then held the hand of her daughter and then kissed it . ....... aww....... You do the whole mother-daughter relationship really well but that is another story . Anticipation! ;D Thank you so much Kitie!! ;D ;D ;D That was a lovely story
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 21, 2008 23:26:26 GMT 12
;D ;D ;D Aw, that was a very beautiful story! Indeed, you do the whole mother-daughter relationship very well, Kitie. Very nice descriptions! The River Mersey, Stonehenge, the curtain... Oh, my poem! hehe.... Loved Albert's down to earth language “Where the bloody hell is that Kite ?”he said . I saw that red headed jump in the time machine and he buggered off "but thats another story" .... i'm already impatient to know! Now... understanding time. Guin is half human half alien. She was born to an alien father and a human mother, on Earth. And she killed herself in order to go back to the land of her father called Octania ... right? So, star travellers, Asteral travellers and Time travellers... the only thing they have in common is that they travel... but they are all different right? So albert is an Asteral Traveller and Guin is a Star Traveler and thats why Gali is half human....? I'm getting it wrong arent I... Star travellers come from Orion's belt .... and the place where star travellers come from is Octania... So does that mean Octania is in Orion's belt? Now that.... "and the Egyptians wrote the book of the dead , that was the how the Pharaohs joined the star travellers in the after life , so they buried them with there treasures and embalming the bodies so they could be in the same body when they reincarnate , but for the ones who were not took to the after life , the home of he star travellers, and the space ships would come and take them home ,the ones who were not prepared for the after life they would end up being reborn on the place where they died , as in Earth , and they would be reincarnated back here and , after so many times you would soon forget who you were and become just another human going about your life and soon you would find out there is something different about you and learn the way of the book of the dead , magic and become aware that you would soon be walking the Earth again" I still need to figure that bit out... Another great story, Kitie!
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Post by mrkite23 on May 23, 2008 6:57:12 GMT 12
Answers ! You want Answers ! Star Travellers = Aliens from Octania Guinn is indeed Half alien half Human but thats was her first life . As in Egypt , so it does get a bit complicated , but she then becomes an Astral Traveller as same as Albert Albert is a Astral but wouldnt become a time traveller untill he meets Kite As Alberts DNA well all in good time , but Gali has got her powers and her alien blood from Guinn in a strange way [ as in i dont know the answer to that one yet ] as Guinn must have some in her some where , maybe her Jeans Glastonbury Festival ! you must have heard of it , Macca Head Lined a few years ago[ couldnt get a ticket ] Que Google . I know got a bit complicated , but i hard a tough time with this one But i tried a different approach than the usual, i think it has its moments and the poem thingy was a idea i just had and tried to put a story round it [ as in Lost Honey] Ta . ;D
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 23, 2008 17:10:59 GMT 12
D'you know, i had a different idea for what you'll do with the Lost idea...
So about first lifes... how does it work? reincarnation secret knowers would have different lives, and they would stil remember what they did in the previous life? Can they die of old age?
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Post by mrkite23 on May 24, 2008 23:52:10 GMT 12
The Lost idea , I couldnt really get my head round to fit it in the story , like i said , i was swimming in deep water with this one , maybe if i had used the Lost idea , it may have been a better ending , but i was pleased with the poem bit , i guess i`m not cut out to be a love intrest writer As for first lifers . Like in Alberts case , he was born just another human , who learnt the ways of reincarnation . As for Guinn she is half alien , and no doubt has the an advanced mind of most humans . I hope i have cleared that up
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Post by Honey_Bunny on May 25, 2008 20:33:36 GMT 12
Never underestimate yourself, my dear Kite. Yes, but when you lead multiple lives, do you remember what happened and who you met in your previous lives? [you do dont you?] But now I am confuzed again... so whats the difference of having multiple lives [like Guin] and parallel universe? On another note, dont you think Roy Harper's You would be a good song for Guin and Albert?
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Post by mrkite23 on May 26, 2008 2:58:50 GMT 12
Thank You Honey , i try to keep the storys fresh , so i then get myself all in a pickle , and when i stray from comedy well Multipule lives ? . Oh ah , well i think its on and off , or just depending how the storys going and if i can cheat a bit Parallel Univerese well thats another place and the people lead a different life , but then again ,same ans. as above After all its .... You . Yeh brilliant song for them Another for the soundtrack
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