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Post by Piney Heart on Aug 21, 2008 15:03:37 GMT 12
Okay I wrote this for English class a couple years ago. It's one of my best poems. Now looking back on it, I have no idea how I wrote it since I suck at poems but here it is:
The morning stream
I walked along the stream All I could do was daydream
The sky was still dark All I saw was the faint shadow of a meadowlark
I could smell the sweet blossums in the air Oh the scent, I wish I could share!
A small grey fish glided past Leaving the rest of the creek empty and vast
Some fuchsia flowers opened their buds A bumpy toad made it's way through the slippery muds
With a slip and a slide I suddenly fell down into to the tide
I landed in the cool, silvery waters Was joined by the silky, brown otters
I looked way up above, to see the sun peeking through For soon, the skies would be blue
But I sat in the murky pond What a morning, I yawned
My mother came out with a pot in her hand Her eyes stretched out across the grassland
I was told I must eat, before a day on the farm I shall never forget the stream in the morning and all of it's charm
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Post by Honey_Bunny on Aug 21, 2008 17:27:27 GMT 12
Aw thats lovely! Don't you sometimes wish these things we write about actually happen? I do... Nice one Apple!
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Post by Octie on Aug 27, 2008 21:24:11 GMT 12
Wow..... that's really beautiful Pinie!! My favourite bit was the one with the silky otters ^__^ I wanna fall into a stream too and play with them! ;D Awesome stuff!
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Post by mrkite23 on Aug 28, 2008 7:33:33 GMT 12
A nice poem Pineapple
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Post by Piney Heart on Aug 28, 2008 8:56:37 GMT 12
Thanks guys. Yes Honey that would be cool if they actually happened. I've another poem coming up, another oldie lool, so you may have seen it already...but whatev..
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Post by Honey_Bunny on Aug 29, 2008 10:47:32 GMT 12
the more the marrier! I like your poems!
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