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Post by Honey_Bunny on Dec 8, 2008 14:08:48 GMT 12
I wrote two poems last week. One inspired by Yes' Awaken the other inspired by Lennonism ;D as in by his poems I want it to snow As it reminds me of your freckles Change of season are like your miracles I want it to shine on me and everyone I see Turn the night into day You brighten me in every way The waves of the sea and the salty air Bring back the memories that I am here and you are there
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Post by Honey_Bunny on Dec 8, 2008 14:13:41 GMT 12
The second one I'm going to the city To see a seeing sight I've waited half a century To see what's on tonight I was so happy When I finally heard the news I'm going to the show on Wednessdy Just like in "Something in the Way She Moves" And so to the show I went Got my ticket , ice cream and all I got out of the taxi for I've sent And climbed cheaper up the wall Well what a disappointment I can tell you now They don't know how to put on a show They really don't know how I went to talk them , I was all really mad Kick, bite, hit - the scene has turned red They put me in a police car But I knew how to run away Got a free ride home, just like the other day Here's my advice for the young ones The little snotty lads To have a really good one Have lots of milk and bread
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Post by Octie on Dec 14, 2008 12:23:49 GMT 12
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Post by samiface on Mar 25, 2009 19:31:34 GMT 12
lovely and lyrical. it made me smile
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Post by Honey_Bunny on Mar 26, 2009 9:04:21 GMT 12
I am glad!
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Post by pbeng on Apr 6, 2009 2:15:32 GMT 12
good poems,i dont know how you get them to rhyme so well ^_^
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